@ Shawni: Can you quit going after myself? He may have supah high expectations for mappers, but that's no reason to flame him.
Also, you always say stuff like "I like this map, but it can be betther", but you never tell what the problem is. You basically make useless comments that don't really help the mapper improve. It's good to be nice and all, but you shouldn't avoid criticising things.
Oh, and on the map, I'll make a comment about visuals this time. People really dislike the dust tileset, as they think it's bad/overused, so I recommend switching it up. You don't really have to do any work to switch though, you just have to switch tilesets.